Recently my friend Ashutosh visited this blog and left the following comment for my poem
"all i can say is that to me it looks like a collection of contrasting sentences and if that is poetry all the best buddy"
Now the poem is an abstract piece and thus different people do see it differently (beauty in the beholder's eye all over again) but this comment prompted me to express what i was feeling when i wrote the poem. So read on..
Through the poem i was trying to express the awe that one experiences when one takes a break from the monotone of a mechanical existence to experience life.
It was life in its various vagaries that every line of the poem expressed.
Contrast was used to highlight the astonishing sense of beauty which is simulataneously present in things which are as disparate as a green jungle and a dead autumn leaf (and of course all other such examples used in the poem).
The questioning tone of the poem was used to express the inquisitiveness that is an inherent part of any human being.
The questioning tone of the poem was used to express the inquisitiveness that is an inherent part of any human being.
And the last line which is also the title of the poem was a reiteration of the fact that it is the activity of the element of life within us that springs into action every time we see nature in its most unadulterated form causing a deep sense of awe somewhere within us.
After reading this i will request Ashu and all others who shared the same feelings as his when they read the poem to revisit the poem, may be this time it will convey something more than what it did when you read it the last time.
My next post also expresses similar feelings but in a very different way.
And yes the medium this time will be prose and not verse.
After reading this i will request Ashu and all others who shared the same feelings as his when they read the poem to revisit the poem, may be this time it will convey something more than what it did when you read it the last time.
My next post also expresses similar feelings but in a very different way.
And yes the medium this time will be prose and not verse.
So please do read the story of Alex coming up very soon.
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